Awesome!

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It's kinda neat how she always compares her enemies to whether or not they stack up to "That Man".

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awesome!!!

ya know!!!

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This is a solid piece, but there are a lot of little things that kind of fuck it up.

Her face seems squashed and elongated, the ponytail is on the wrong axis given her head position, nostrils are lopsided and not placed properly, the sword hand/wrist position is hella awkward, her neck is overly thick and the trapezius muscles start too high. Finally, the body looks flat, both on the Y and Z axes.

Keep working at it mate.

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Wait so the english speakers are communicating in Japanese and the Japanese speakers are communicating in english?

Jesus christ what went wrong

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i believe the face looks flat mainly because there isn't enough shading or the shades are simply too light, making it lose depth
i actually think the nostrils are positioned fine, but they are too small making them seen like they are in the wrong place since they aren't occupying as much space
i see the problem about the trapezius muscle on the right side (her left) of the neck but not that much on the left (her right).
for the neck i was comparing mine and her neck and i definitely have a bigger neck, i really don't think her neck is that thick, although i did reduce its size during the working process
the wrist i think seems off because of the way the line art is drawn, i kinda messed up on that part, so i might have to edit it so that the wrist aligns better with the arm, etc
and the ponytail, i knew that the perspective of the ponytail was off but i was too darn lazy to change it when i noticed

well thanks a lot for the wonderful feedback
i might edit this one, i say might because the file is pretty heavy and i'm inpatient
but i'll definitely try to keep these things in mind for my next drawings

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No problem, it's what I do since I don't have a sub. Free critiques for everybody!

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Wait so the english speakers are communicating in Japanese and the Japanese speakers are communicating in english?

Jesus christ what went wrong

i wish the critique feature wasn't for subscribers only

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thanks

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